Hi Mark, if I haven't said it before now ... Welcome to Pixies. It is always great to have new writers join us ...

Here's a suggestion that worked well for me when I first came to Pixies (under a different name than the one I post under now) ... I read stories by others and paid attention to the ones I thought were good as far as how they told their stories, learned from the things I liked. I also formed friendships with several of the writers and commented publicly and privately on what I liked about their stories, etc.

Sometimes the really GREAT storytellers have to wait a bit (sometimes a very LONG bit) to get any comments because the story they tell has done such a great job for the reader that they need recovery time!

And for those who would like to read Mark's story .... click here

An Erotic Story