01-30-2005, 11:03 PM
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Join Date: Nov 2004
Location: Melbourne, Australia
Posts: 482
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Feedback please
Hey everyone. I have only posted one story here at the moment (an erotic story) . I am working on a second. I will even do a part 2 to my first Now I would just like some feedback on my first so I can get some idea as to what people thought of it.
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