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imaginewithme 08-31-2004 11:02 PM

Afternoon Delight by Coaster
 
Well you sexy thang you have posted what I would say a wonderful way to spend an afternoon!!!!

Great work hon!

:lurv:


Afternoon Delight

Pegasusx62 08-31-2004 11:19 PM

very sexy story Coaster....can imagine being undressed & caressed in this way....mmmmmmmmm :heart:

Teddy Bear 08-31-2004 11:54 PM

OMG Coaster, I loved this story!!

mmmmm.....Very sexy!



And your AV is great! yum! ;)

Coaster 09-01-2004 02:35 PM

Well thank you for taking the time to give me feedback! It is my very first effort EVER! So don't be shy telling me what you think!

IWM.... Thanks hun, wouldn't be a fun afternoon to try!
Pegasusx62.... ty very much..... wanna try it sometime?
Teddy Bear! ... thank you Your Sexiness!

Pita 09-01-2004 05:16 PM

Not only are you one of the sexiest men I know but your also a great story teller. :)

It was like I was there and you did it just right Baby. ;) :hot:

Vurginne 09-01-2004 06:58 PM

Wow Coaster that was amazing! I loved how it had a romantic soft tone as it began with all the gentle touches and got a little more hot and heavy towards the end. :hot: Hot Hot Hot. I hope to read more!

flutelady 09-01-2004 07:08 PM

Coaster, I love your story! I agree too... there's romance and tenderness, and a little bit of raunch. Plus, I love the element of risk- I've enjoyed taking a few risks, myself.

Great story, thanks!! :wine:

imaginewithme 09-01-2004 07:38 PM

I am ready to be your afternoon delight please.

Pegasusx62 09-01-2004 09:11 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Coaster
Well thank you for taking the time to give me feedback! It is my very first effort EVER! So don't be shy telling me what you think!

Pegasusx62.... ty very much..... wanna try it sometime?


you know you don't even have to ask...*winks* :)

Lisa976 09-01-2004 11:48 PM

MMM very very sexy,,,,,,Sounds like a great afternoon,,pr evening,,or any time of the day type thing :halo:

Coaster 09-02-2004 07:35 AM

WOW..... Thank you ladies and for those that asked.... I do have another story in mind but it will take awhile to write... Stay Tuned!

Tess........ Gees tess.... right there huh.... Wooo Hoo!!! Thank you Oh sexy one!
Vurginne... So you like the romance AND some HOT action!!! My kind of woman! TY
FluteLady.... Thanks sweetie..... wanna risk it all sometime?

Coaster 09-02-2004 07:38 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by imaginewithme
I am ready to be your afternoon delight please.



IWM.. OH IWM..... I'm more than ready to take you on a walk along the shore ... and then, well re-read Afternoon Delight!

Coaster 09-02-2004 07:41 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Pegasusx62
you know you don't even have to ask...*winks* :)



So hun! How will I ever know what you want and when?

Oh watch for your *winks*! hehe

Coaster 09-02-2004 07:43 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Lisa976
MMM very very sexy,,,,,,Sounds like a great afternoon,,pr evening,,or any time of the day type thing :halo:


Well hun... just think of this story the next time you are walking your western shore!!! Thanks sweetie!

imaginewithme 09-02-2004 05:31 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Coaster
IWM.. OH IWM..... I'm more than ready to take you on a walk along the shore ... and then, well re-read Afternoon Delight!


Hopefully we'll have a reenactment.....

Pegasusx62 09-02-2004 07:41 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Coaster
So hun! How will I ever know what you want and when?

Oh watch for your *winks*! hehe


Oh think you know what to look for....*grins & winks* :)

imaginewithme 09-04-2004 10:14 AM

well, babe...when we having our Afternoon Delight?????

Coaster 09-04-2004 11:48 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by imaginewithme
well, babe...when we having our Afternoon Delight?????



How fast can you hop on a plane? :slurp: :hug: :sex:

imaginewithme 09-05-2004 01:58 AM

Well, we've already decided that it's a 6 hour flight, haven't we?

Can I pick the place that the afternoon delight gets to happen at???? ;)
:lurv: :love: :x:

Coaster 09-05-2004 07:02 AM

:x: Sure baby... you name it! :hug: :x:

imaginewithme 09-05-2004 08:47 AM

On the shore, under the moonlight????? :x: :hug:

Coaster 09-05-2004 09:21 PM

[QUOTE=imaginewithme]On the shore, under the moonlight????? QUOTE]


Under the moonlight would be extremely exciting baby! But then it's not Afternoon Delight........ we will just make it Delightful! :slurp: :hug: :x:

imaginewithme 09-05-2004 11:04 PM

Well, whatever it's meant to be called...we need to get it done! :x:

jennaflower 09-06-2004 12:02 AM

Great story... thanks Coaster....

So.... when can WE go to the park?

imaginewithme 09-06-2004 03:31 PM

Ok, I have given this a lot of thought....

now can we have a moonlight delight please?

Coaster 09-06-2004 11:02 PM

Thanks Jenna .... thats nice to hear especially from you!! You name the time and the place for our rendevous!

Coaster 09-06-2004 11:04 PM

WOW baby........... I love it! Let's do it!

I believe my next story title is "Moonlight Delight"....... wanna help me out with the details and the script?

imaginewithme 09-07-2004 07:02 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Coaster
WOW baby........... I love it! Let's do it!

I believe my next story title is "Moonlight Delight"....... wanna help me out with the details and the script?


Do you think we should try it first and then write down what happened?

Coaster 09-07-2004 08:13 PM

Excellent suggestion! When's the next full moon?

imaginewithme 09-08-2004 07:01 AM

Next full moon????? I think you would know..........

wyndhy 09-08-2004 02:46 PM

hey c, i'm real glad you gave me a heads up on your first story EVER. i wouldn't have missed reading it for the world. you told a wonderful, sexy story. i'm so proud of you :) and a little turned on, too (ok, ok ALOT turned on) :hot:

Coaster 09-09-2004 05:44 PM

IWM ... I'll howl at the nxt full moon for ya!

wyndhy ... Well thank you hun.... i've enjoyed reading yours and I'm sure i got some pointers from ya cause they affected me the same way!:devil::slurp:

imaginewithme 09-10-2004 06:59 AM

I'll listen for you!

Stolen Kisses 02-13-2005 09:27 AM

:devilish: Great story Coaster. Very sexy! Sounds like my kinda afternoon!

Barb

Coaster 02-17-2005 07:49 AM

Thank you Stolen Kisses!

It was exciting to write and hopefully, exciting for you to read! :x:

shoresexy 03-30-2005 12:26 PM

Found it!! and Coaster you found it... You know how to woo a girl don't you? Thanks for the "Dream" and I look forward to reading more of your thoughts!
:wave:

Coaster 04-02-2005 10:13 PM

Thanks shoresexy....... glad you enjoyed and were able to have such a pleasurable daydream! :slurp:

BIGbad 04-03-2005 09:00 PM

I have yet to read your story but from what wyndhy said it is a delight















Sorry Coaster but I could not restrain myself :rofl:

Coaster 04-05-2005 06:35 PM

HAAHAHA........ thanks Bigbad............ sad thing is.................................... im old enough to remember when that song first came out........... :(

imaginewithme 04-06-2005 05:21 PM

You're a great writer, where's the next one?


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